Day One of Clarion

Okay, yeah, I volunteered to have my first story critiqued on the first day. But did it have to be the very first story of the whole process?

It's really quite painful to submit a first draft for critiquing. People keep commenting on things you WOULD have fixed, if only you'd had the TIME, what, do they think you're STUPID, of COURSE you would have fixed them. It's going to be a rather harrowing six weeks.

Once I finish lunch, I have my one-hour one-on-one with this week's tutor. I wonder how that's going to go.